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twincityhacker ([personal profile] twincityhacker) wrote2007-09-12 10:38 am
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on the other side of the line

"on the other end of the line" UnAuthorized Riff on [livejournal.com profile] jadesfire2808's The Key

London, 1978

Jill fucking hated that telephone. Her job was to re-route all the calls Torchwood One received to the proper department or person, and to get rid of the crank callers.

Not that there were many pranksters calling Torchwood, but some idiots just liked pushing the buttons.

Thousands of calls flashed though her board each day, but when it came to a starving man on the other side of the world, there was just... him trapped on an outpost and her trapped listening to his ramblings on the static-filled line. And Jill fucking hated that telephone.

[identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com 2007-09-12 06:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I like this. I notice it's locked at the moment - if you unlock it, could you let me know, so I can link to it? It goes really well with the others. Chilling and sad and just right.
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[identity profile] msp-hacker.livejournal.com 2007-09-12 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I wasn't sure on the exact manners of the situation, so I locked it.
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[personal profile] unfeathered 2007-09-13 06:26 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, a very interesting addition to the 'verse! :-)

Poor Jill. Listening to Jack and, presumably, unable to talk to him!

(P.S. I love your banner!)
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[identity profile] msp-hacker.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 07:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Jill can talk to him - though, I'm not sure that talking at this point would make any party feel better!

...And I just realized that it's Jack and Jill here. *facepalm*
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[personal profile] unfeathered 2007-09-13 08:03 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL. I didn't notice either :-)

[identity profile] hellenebright.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 08:54 am (UTC)(link)
Very.....unsettling. Fits in very well.
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[identity profile] msp-hacker.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 07:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! It struck me while reading "Antarctica" that since he had phone service to Torchwood that while his mind was wandering he might have started calling in reports ever few hours, not understanding that it wasn't the days that he was thinking it was.

[identity profile] hellenebright.livejournal.com 2007-09-13 09:23 pm (UTC)(link)
That seems horribly likely...

[identity profile] hellenebright.livejournal.com 2007-09-17 10:10 pm (UTC)(link)
BTW - just to let you know, I have recced this fic over at my journal

[identity profile] laligin.livejournal.com 2007-09-18 04:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Hellenebright recced it, and here I be. :)

Lovely tie-in. Very nicely done.
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[identity profile] msp-hacker.livejournal.com 2007-09-19 02:07 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!