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twincityhacker) wrote2009-08-01 09:03 am
twincityhacker) wrote2009-08-01 09:03 am
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I have finally managed to fix the majority of Children of Earth. I kept the 456's motivation's intact, but I rebuilt everything else about them. I filled in the plot holes, straighted the logic fails, and tried to clearly point the source of Clem's powers to still being connected to the 456. and less that having mental illness gives you magical powers.
I also did things that just make me happy. One of the radio reports in the background is that a large bird was seen flying over Cardiff. Jack mentions that the Hub only sustained "minor damage" because after the first earthquake they fortified the whole structure with alien tech, though he hasn't had time to fix the roof after the last Dalek invasion.
The only thing I'm waffling on is whether or not the final death should take place. I can justify it either way, since it's set up that they don't actually know whether or not he's dead until after the deed is done. I'm leaning on the side that he should live, because the story has already finished when the button is pushed, and killing him would be for the sake of killing him.
I also did things that just make me happy. One of the radio reports in the background is that a large bird was seen flying over Cardiff. Jack mentions that the Hub only sustained "minor damage" because after the first earthquake they fortified the whole structure with alien tech, though he hasn't had time to fix the roof after the last Dalek invasion.
The only thing I'm waffling on is whether or not the final death should take place. I can justify it either way, since it's set up that they don't actually know whether or not he's dead until after the deed is done. I'm leaning on the side that he should live, because the story has already finished when the button is pushed, and killing him would be for the sake of killing him.